Evaluating the Initial Idea

When we discussed the initial idea with Mrs McLuckie, she thought it was too linear with the everyday events because it made it straight forward. We realised that she was right, as we then thought that it would be difficult to make it appealing. All that we needed to do was to make it stranger in a different way. Mrs McLuckie said we already had the clown mask idea, which was great and all we needed to do was to just push it. So we decided to keep the ideas of the mask being involved as it created a supernatural sense to the story. The clown mask seemed best as many people have a fear of clowns which would help us to keep the story in a disturbing mood.

When we listened to the song again, it did not fit in with the storyline, now that we had a open mind about adding in more intimidating elements. So we have decided to look for a new song and this time, we will be looking at the lyrics first to figure out what they mean to us. After this, we shall be trying to add the idea we have to the song and seeing if it works in the way we would like to show.

At the moment, we have all agreed to including the masks in the story, adding more to the storyline, keeping it as story and finding a new song.